I’m really quite amazed at how one can write such a dumb FL in a story like that (not very original, there are several stories with the same “trick”… never seen the lead be as dumb as to touch or try to touch the screen in front of anyone… especially when she’s supposed to be a talented writer who collects prizes… she just CAN’T be THAT dumb (she can be dumb in love, no problem, but not in her every attitudes toward every situation, expecially not being able to just REPLY, talk not think…)
‘Only 1” is a better story with the same trick. The leads are older though.
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I’m really quite amazed at how one can write such a dumb FL in a story like that (not very original, there are several stories with the same “trick”… never seen the lead be as dumb as to touch or try to touch the screen in front of anyone… especially when she’s supposed to be a talented writer who collects prizes… she just CAN’T be THAT dumb (she can be dumb in love, no problem, but not in her every attitudes toward every situation, expecially not being able to just REPLY, talk not think…)
‘Only 1” is a better story with the same trick. The leads are older though.