I feel like this manga could be better if it just connected more. Like the best way to describe it is reading a chapter and something will happen, but then something else will happen like one page later and it has no correlation. There’s no connection between something that happens and something that’s happening. I don’t know really any other way to explain it besides, this just feels like you’re looking at a dotted line instead of a full line. this chapter was better because it went from the fight to him training and then stuff came out about his senior brother, and then obviously taking his niece somewhere that was a connection, but I just felt like previously there really isn’t and I feel like that is holding it back. a lot very good examples is there was no explanation of why this body swapping ritual made him go into the past, and there is no explanation why the old demonic dude is in his head. Just kinda showed up. I mean, I know the author won’t see this but once that is fixed, I can definitely see it being a better manga.
Dessy1
I feel like this manga could be better if it just connected more. Like the best way to describe it is reading a chapter and something will happen, but then something else will happen like one page later and it has no correlation. There’s no connection between something that happens and something that’s happening. I don’t know really any other way to explain it besides, this just feels like you’re looking at a dotted line instead of a full line. this chapter was better because it went from the fight to him training and then stuff came out about his senior brother, and then obviously taking his niece somewhere that was a connection, but I just felt like previously there really isn’t and I feel like that is holding it back. a lot very good examples is there was no explanation of why this body swapping ritual made him go into the past, and there is no explanation why the old demonic dude is in his head. Just kinda showed up. I mean, I know the author won’t see this but once that is fixed, I can definitely see it being a better manga.